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Problem: This is my rough draft of an structuralist analysis of a poem for ENGL 1102 and I would like feedback on the content of the essay. I want to make sure the ideas in the essay are well developed and they are not lacking supporting evidence. Also, I would like to know if my in-text citations are correct for the MLA format. Anther concern I have is punctuation, I tend to use too many commas so I would like to know if there are any comma splices present in the essay. And I am open to any other suggestions to make the essay stronger. Thank you.
Problem: Hello, My name is Deanna Ferguson and I am a student in Mrs. Wesrick's English 1102 class. Our assignment is to get an essay formally critiqued by a GSU tutor. Will you please proof-read and critique my attached essay and provide written feedback on the assignment. If possible, please provide mark-up/recommendations on the actual document. Just as a head up, this assignment is due back to the teacher tomorrow night. Thank you very much. Please feel free to call me with questions. Thank you, Deanna 470-385-7024
Problem: Part of our essay assignment is to have our rough draft reviewed by a tutor; in particular, I was hoping to get feedback concerning my paragraph transitions and the depth of my concluding paragraph. I'm not sure whether my conclusion is fine as it is or if I should further elaborate on how the tone and themes that I identify earlier in the essay work together to communicate the meaning of the poem.
Problem: Please review my paper and send it to this email address. I cannot access my student email. It's a peer review requirement that I need for a grade in this class. The paper is argumentative and persuasive. I need to make sure that I have followed all MLA guidelines with clear the opening statement, three or more topics with support, proper MLA citations and sources and anything else that you may find within the document. Sincerely, Alexis Bailey
Problem: My essay is argumentative research essay with cited research about Homelessness could be up-lifted towards better future. In this essay, I am arguing instead of giving money we should help them in other ways. I would like to have a help in reviewing my essay, transition sentences and citations. Thank you for your help. Suniti
Problem: I need help reviewing my argumentative essay for my English class. I want to make sure I have it formatted correctly in MLA and also that the flow of the essay and the strength of my argument holds weight with the sources I provide in the paper. Please let me know what I can do to improve my paper. Thank You!