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Problem: Hello, could you please review my essay? I am writing an argumentative essay covering the topic of minimum wage. My essay is supposed to be 4 pages in length, but I only have 2 at this current moment. Before I type anymore of the essay, I wanted to submit my work so far so that you guys could critique it so far. I mainly want to know if my organization is correct and if it follows the structure of an argumentative. I am following the structure found on the GSU website so I think it is correct structure-wise, I just wanted to make sure. Also, one of my sources is a website from the entire new york times and there isn't 1 specific author so I wasn't 100% sure on how to cite it. Anything else you notice that I could improve upon would be greatly appreciated. Thank You! Jameson Drake
Problem: Hello This is a rough draft. I would like help on stronger topic sentences and transition sentences or concluding statements. I know I have a lot to finish but any pointers that can be given with what I have thus far would greatly be appreciated. Thanks in advance. Essay directions........Combining Elements: Choose four literary elements within ONE poem. Describe their use. Then provide a detailed analysis of how the poet blended the elements together throughout the poem.
Problem: This is my third major essay for English 1102. This is the prompt: "Combining Elements: Choose four literary elements within ONE poem. Describe their use. Then provide a detailed analysis of how the poet blended the elements together throughout the poem." For this essay, I am using the poem "Dulce et Decorum Est". I mainly need help in embedding my quotes because I don't like how I introduce them in an obvious and bland way like "This is seen from when it says". Another thing I want to work on is making my essay flow better from one paragraph to the next. Also I feel like my conclusion could use some work. Any feedback on the things I mentioned or even things that I'm not aware of is much appreciated.
Problem: This is my rough draft of an structuralist analysis of a poem for ENGL 1102 and I would like feedback on the content of the essay. I want to make sure the ideas in the essay are well developed and they are not lacking supporting evidence. Also, I would like to know if my in-text citations are correct for the MLA format. Anther concern I have is punctuation, I tend to use too many commas so I would like to know if there are any comma splices present in the essay. And I am open to any other suggestions to make the essay stronger. Thank you.
Problem: Hello, My name is Deanna Ferguson and I am a student in Mrs. Wesrick's English 1102 class. Our assignment is to get an essay formally critiqued by a GSU tutor. Will you please proof-read and critique my attached essay and provide written feedback on the assignment. If possible, please provide mark-up/recommendations on the actual document. Just as a head up, this assignment is due back to the teacher tomorrow night. Thank you very much. Please feel free to call me with questions. Thank you, Deanna 470-385-7024
Problem: Part of our essay assignment is to have our rough draft reviewed by a tutor; in particular, I was hoping to get feedback concerning my paragraph transitions and the depth of my concluding paragraph. I'm not sure whether my conclusion is fine as it is or if I should further elaborate on how the tone and themes that I identify earlier in the essay work together to communicate the meaning of the poem.