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Problem: May you please assist me with Feedback? I have created a rough draft for my final essay. I would love to know your thoughts, where I may need improvement and I would truly love for anyone to assist with an amazing conclusion for why credit is a 'needed want,' for this is the entire argument of my paper. Do you feel this is the best argumentative essay? Why or why not.
Problem: Hello, I would like advice on how to improve my draft so far! I still have more paragraphs to add, but I would appreciate if someone could look over my introduction and the body paragraphs I have. To give some context, our essay topic was to write a persuasive research essay.
Problem: How should I end my second to last paragraph (the one about academics)? A couple of in-text citations are pretty lengthy.. How do I cut them down? In my introduction paragraph I used a lot of statistics. They're all from the same source so how do I cite them? Do I have to cite it after every sentence or can I put it at the end of the paragraph? Did I use too much research and not enough of my own voice? Thanks!