Tylan Horton's Request (25 Nov 2018)

My Unit Three Essay needs to be reviewed, revised and edited for my English 1101 that is due on the 26th of November.
ENGL 1101

submitted: Nov 25, 2018
responded: Nov 26, 2018
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  • Maria Batty (admin)
    Nov. 26, 2018, 1:07 p.m.

    Dear Tylan, Thank you for sending your essay to Athena. You don’t say what kind of essay it is supposed to be, so I don’t know if you are answering the prompt. It appears to be compare/contrast. You can find a handout on how to structure a compare/contrast essay at https://success.students.gsu.edu/ltc. Click on Handouts on the left, and then Grammar and Writing Handouts. If it is supposed to be persuasive or argumentative, it is not. We also have a handout on structuring argumentative essays. You need to take a formal academic tone, which means no 1st or 2nd person and no contractions. You are not citing your sources correctly in text, nor is your Works Cited page formatted correctly. Look at the MLA handouts for instructions and examples. I hope you find these comments helpful. If you don't understand how to organize your paper around a thesis statement or how to recognize and correct the types of errors I’ve mentioned, come into a lab to work with a tutor face to face, post specific questions here on Athena, or refer to our handouts. Good luck! If you have a moment, please cut and paste this address into your browser, and take our survey. Thanks! https://gsu.qualtrics.com/jfe/form/SV_6hzzM9kX7sy9aJf

    Nov. 26, 2018, 1:52 p.m. - Tylan Horton

    It is a compare and contrast essay I am sorry that I did not put the specifics down for the review

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